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Wedding Anniversaries

Celebrating fifty years since her wedding day; knowing someday Mistress Death will steal her love away. Crying, trying to forget making vows in church; loving hubby was untrue and left her in the lurch. For Charlotte’s Love and Loss contest

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/21/2015 6:02:00 PM

Excellent rhyme poem.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/22/2014 6:55:00 PM

Great writing as always, Jack. Short and to the point! You've come a long way my friend. Time and prayers bring healing and you'll be rewarded for your loyalty and faithfulness, for sure. Love, xxAnnalise

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/19/2014 9:37:00 AM

We rue, regret and can't forget mistakes that cost us love. 30 years is not enough without help from above. The moments where we alomost quit, bless us with tomorrow. And when that sun finally comes out it eases that deep sorrow. Peace Jack. :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/18/2014 12:04:00 PM

Nicely done on this poem for love and loss. Will try and catch up later as I just got company. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2014 7:50:00 AM

Great expressive work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2014 9:32:00 PM

well done, my friend. the master of the itty bitty poetry form!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/16/2014 6:47:00 PM

Such a sad write, I feel the pain here! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious write this evening my friend! What a brilliant and glorious piece, Great Work!!