Wedding

WEDDING


     Crowded room    
              Nervous groom  
                        Subtle glance     
                                    Heartbeat’s dance…..  promises



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Gibson Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Great little poem that says so much...
Richards Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 9:36 PM
thank you!
Devonshire Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Dear Andy, your poem brings back wonderful memories. Short write, but filled with emotion. Well penned! Best wishes, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Nervous memories for me :) thank you!
Shiells Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 8:21 AM
WOW Andy!! This was written sweetly and beautifully~ Thanks for sharing this wonderful write with us here. Thanks again. Love and Peace, Deborah
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks!
Jerden Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Well done! Short and sweet! Cheers, Roy
Richards Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 7:51 PM
thanks!
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 1:06 AM
simply BEAUTIFUL! hugs jan xxxx
Richards Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 7:51 AM
so was the bride! :) thank you...
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