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Katuata
A type of romantic Japanese verse based on natural instincts. It follows a specific syllable count of; 5-7-7,  A katuata is a lover's query or an emotive statement that bears a response on the last line, either in part or, entirely.

a shy skittish smile highlights her angelic face, can angels fall in love? goddess of my dreams caught in my web of desire are you a wish, or a hope? (Double Katuata) 7/13/2021

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Date: 7/14/2021 5:42:00 AM
Beautiful wording. Each line golden!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/14/2021 7:07:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/13/2021 5:37:00 PM
Nicely composed and written, Emile. Best wishes in William's contest.
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