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Weaving Woes

When mourning dove sings, weave moonlit woes from silver, syllables of stars.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2023 8:10:00 AM

Ahhh!! I can no longer hear the mourning doves sing and I wonder do they migrate or have they gone into hiding for the winter. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/11/2023 2:52:00 PM

Just now able to go back and read some of your earlier poems. I love this one in its simplicity. The 2d line is my favorite...moonlit woes from silver...just perfect. You've been gifted with a priceless poetic ability. Glad you're here on PS...have a good evening, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 10/11/2023 8:23:00 PM

Awwn my beautiful sara, i need to post more haikus, my haikus are more simple haha i was lucky to win in Haiku contest with this. Thank you sweet soul u are precious

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2023 2:54:00 PM

I can see how this topped the chart. Line 3 is so clever.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/28/2023 10:38:00 PM

Lovely lovely!!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/26/2023 2:25:00 AM

Wonderful write. I just love this :) Congrats on the top win. God bless you, Love, Gina

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/25/2023 4:20:00 AM

Oh my, what an exquisitely crafted haiku that beautifully captures the essence of the haiku soul. The intricate tapestry of vibrant and evocative imagery woven within it is utterly enchanting. It truly is a delightful haiku, and I extend my heartfelt congratulations on your truly deserving victory.

Arlo Parker

Date: 8/24/2023 1:55:00 PM

Excellent piece, Numero Uno! :o))

Ink Empress
Date: 8/24/2023 10:58:00 PM

Thank you soo much

Matt Caliri

Date: 8/24/2023 1:14:00 PM

Great work, Empress taking the number 1 spot in my haiku contest! First out of 71!! I loved your final line, it won me over.

Ink Empress
Date: 8/24/2023 10:58:00 PM

Wow im truly touched and honored and humbled by the placement, 1st place, thank you so much, didnt expect this at all, you’ve truly made my day. I appreciate you

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/20/2023 5:51:00 PM

Dear Ink Empress, the weave of your rich imagery is enchanting. A lovely haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Ink Empress
Date: 8/24/2023 10:59:00 PM

Thank you kind soul for your best wishes and support truly grateful

Paul Callus

Date: 8/20/2023 6:28:00 AM

Three delightful lines which reach a climax in the end line. This would have been ideal for Matt Caliri's haiku contest. ~ Regards // paul

Ink Empress
Date: 8/24/2023 10:59:00 PM

It was for the contest, Paul, and how kind of you , i appreciate your sincere support truly : thank you so much

Sally Eslinger

Date: 8/17/2023 5:18:00 PM

3 scenes. 3 moods. 3 lines. A complete painting ofa heart’s felt circle. And true…so true. But then, i interpret “ the syllables of stars” as joyful, which the song of the mourning dove when with its mate can also be. Turn, turn, turn… Lovely penning. Hugs, sally

Ink Empress
Date: 8/24/2023 11:00:00 PM

Wow what an amazing comment on my haiku, you truly are such a generous soul, i truly appreciate you so very much: thank you for feeling my words and for being supportive

Arlo Parker

Date: 8/16/2023 9:37:00 AM

Delightful piece, IE. Welcome;post often. :o)