Adell Foster Poet Verse

Weathering the Storm (Lune)

The weathered nest swayed 
in tree top 
battered by the wind 






[ Poet' View: The lune is an American form of poetry similar to the haiku. It has thirteen 
syllables; there are two variations it can be written in the format of 3/5/3 or 5/3/5 syllable 
counts. ]

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Sara Kendrick November 30, 2010 at 8:58 AM Enjoyed the descriptive and expressive work in this one..I am glad that I chose it to read this morn..I was delighted that you found a line that caught your attention in my work..Sara

Sharon Winter December 27, 2008 at 5:10 AM Strong imagery here Adell. Very interesting poetry form you made great use of. Love, Shar