Weather Warm and Will Be a Storm Horn Haiku
when (while) (wet) weather was (would be) (may be) (really) warm
dark (gray) (wet) clouds had started (did begin) (would begin) to form
then would start (had started) (sky indicated) a storm
So how would you write this poem?
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