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Weather Warm and Will Be a Storm Horn Haiku

when (while) (wet) weather was (would be) (may be) (really) warm dark (gray) (wet) clouds had started (did begin) (would begin) to form then would start (had started) (sky indicated) a storm So how would you write this poem?

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Date: 12/27/2023 12:46:00 AM
Great!
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James Horn
Date: 1/2/2024 4:50:00 PM
Gee Find it hard to wait for a great date then celebrate.
Date: 12/26/2023 7:45:00 PM
This verse is not a haiku, but your words and question did inspire it: SUMMER STORM// Blue sky gathers clouds/ This warm summer day with you,/ Rain falls on us, our lips/ Lightning strikes// Blessings, Chetta
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Date: 1/2/2024 4:43:00 PM
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