Weather Vane

I asked the spring its name
It answered only to the 
Weather vane

Their secret conversation
Carried on the wind, while
Fading stars, in dawns
Volcano sky, wondered 
Deep why weather cocks
Can’t fly?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 20, 2016 at 2:26 PM
There is raw talent contained within these lines, Peter. Like Ted Hughes once said: "Whatever you choose to write about - Write as if you were it". The last verse demonstrates the short of creative imagination that most "Poets" on this site do not, sadly, possess. My very best regards...my friend. :) john
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