Weather Vane

the cock inspires dawn —
unfetters skies auspicious
highs and brazen lows

4/27/2020
Morning Praise Poetry Contest
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Neumann Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 3:03 AM
Very nice. Kind wishes, Kai
Krutsinger Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 6:38 AM
"the cock inspires dawn" - had not thought of this, but it makes indubitable sense to me. Great beginning of a pretty haiku my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Thank you, Caren! “Indubitable sense...love that :) smiling!
Achilles Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 6:04 AM
well done- great write. Regards Julie.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Thank you, Julie!
Romios Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 2:03 AM
A stunning Haiku Panagiota xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Thank you, Panagiota!
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 3:49 PM
yes, it not only inspires dawn. That dang thing wakes us up BEFORE dawn. haha
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 4:51 PM
LOL
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