Weather Right Now

Soaking Branches snap 
Sharp winds slice while thunder strikes
A storm is coming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 28, 2009 at 4:32 PM
Nice use of alliteration and imagery for a creative view. I really like the first line. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen
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November 22, 2009 at 6:04 PM
The first line is excellent, saturated branches can't bear that wait. Nice work...Raul
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November 22, 2009 at 2:35 PM
a very good haiku
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