Weather It Would

Would this kiss feel as warm
During a frigid winter storm
Or my touch still feel soft
As windy snows rage aloft.

Could our embrace induce magic
As a thunderstorm creates havoc
Or your loving seem as sweet
Under torrential freezing sleet.

Would a whisper my sadness bury
While a tornado swirls in fury
Or this love remain the same
In the throes of a hurricane.

They would be void of such strife
As long as my love shares her life
Or I should die while in my pity
Because the weather is within me.


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Date: 1/5/2021 8:38:00 PM
Wow !! I wasn't expecting that ending. I must say. I love everything about the rain- a thunderstorm. Both are magical and stimulating, in so many ways. This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. Something new will be coming from me soon. I am in awe that you have been waiting. :) Brandy
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/6/2021 9:04:00 AM
I am glad that you have enjoyed the poem Brandy. Well, you did say you were working on a story, so I have been patiently waiting.
Date: 1/5/2021 5:36:00 PM
Love storms...love your poem!
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/6/2021 9:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim for stopping by.
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