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Weather It Would

Would this kiss feel as warm During a frigid winter storm Or my touch still feel soft As windy snows rage aloft. Could our embrace induce magic As a thunderstorm creates havoc Or your loving seem as sweet Under torrential freezing sleet. Would a whisper my sadness bury While a tornado swirls in fury Or this love remain the same In the throes of a hurricane. They would be void of such strife As long as my love shares her life Or I should die while in my pity Because the weather is within me. (click on the pic to preview my poetry book!)

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Date: 1/5/2021 8:38:00 PM
Wow !! I wasn't expecting that ending. I must say. I love everything about the rain- a thunderstorm. Both are magical and stimulating, in so many ways. This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. Something new will be coming from me soon. I am in awe that you have been waiting. :) Brandy
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/6/2021 9:04:00 AM
I am glad that you have enjoyed the poem Brandy. Well, you did say you were working on a story, so I have been patiently waiting.
Date: 1/5/2021 5:36:00 PM
Love storms...love your poem!
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/6/2021 9:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim for stopping by.

Book: Shattered Sighs