Linda-Marie Sweetheart Poet Rhyme

Weather Forecast - Twister Terror

  "Weather Forecast - Twister Terror"



twister touchdown twirling free
black funnel cloud spins angrily
wind crackling branches on bare trees
neighborhoods in panic freeze ...
beware windows and open doors
take shelter as fierce rain downpours.

destroying four homes in a row
as lightening bolts ignite scary show
rain cascading fast to slow
as plants and patios endure blasts and blows ...
beware windows and open doors
take shelter as fierce rain downpours.

as time elapsed the sunshine loomed
and happy smiles had fully bloomed
'twas a close call from life to doomed
but God's Almighty Power zoomed ...
so everyone now cherished life
no casualties to end twister strife.



*For Joy Wellington's Weather Forecast Contest ...

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Skat A March 13, 2014 at 2:31 AM deep poem...~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

April Walter Skyy October 8, 2012 at 7:07 AM Congrats on a 1st place win. I really enjoyed your poem.

Kim Merryman October 7, 2012 at 9:29 AM Linda-Marie, congrats on your 1st place win! Great write! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2012 at 10:15 PM Awesome, Linda. Glad to see you in top form and a winner here. Congrats, sweetie (yes, I am seeing my grandkids tomorrow and all is well with them)

Cynthia Alvez October 5, 2012 at 8:43 PM Awesome! Congratulations on this fabulous 1st place win! Cynthia

Joy Wellington October 5, 2012 at 7:29 PM Dearest Linda..congrats on this fine piece being first place on the winners board. Your poem depicted just what I had in mind for my contest...well done! One love. Joy Wells.

Tim Ryerson October 5, 2012 at 3:04 PM Awesome poem Linda Marie!...Congratulations!...Looks like my Saints are the Ain'ts this year...no sweat...got a feeling they're gonna get mad and start kicking some butts right outta the Superdome! Hope Eli and the G-Men make it again...tough division tho! - Tim

Sara Kendrick October 5, 2012 at 1:00 PM Great work that excels in the winners' list..Congrats on your win...Sara

Bukang Liwayway October 5, 2012 at 11:51 AM Congratulations for a big win friend Linda-Marie. it's lovely write. cheers!! (^_^) **Maria**

Poet Destroyer A October 5, 2012 at 8:07 AM LINDA, MY SWEET BFF, congratulations with your awesome "Weather Forecast" poem in Joy's contest... have yourself a good day :-) Love PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 5, 2012 at 7:52 AM won 1st place .. thankxxx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 5, 2012 at 5:51 AM Belated congratulations once again, I am sorry these are late I am busy packing and shopping for my holidays xx

Joseph May October 5, 2012 at 5:32 AM congrats on a smashing win Linda

Carol Sunshine Brown October 5, 2012 at 5:12 AM Congratulations on your win in Joy's "Weather Forecast" contest Linda-Marie. Love Carol

Len Gasun October 5, 2012 at 4:20 AM Congratulations on your fabulous win my dear Linda-Marie!!! hugs:) Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong October 5, 2012 at 3:23 AM Wow, what a wonderful win and a wonderful entry! Congratulations Linda.

Modupe Sefunmi October 5, 2012 at 3:09 AM Congrats on your first place win in Joy's Weather Forecast! Lovely write!

Joseph May September 10, 2012 at 8:56 AM great write Linda... I wrote mine the opposite way...best wishes...love...Joseph

Duncan Chappell September 10, 2012 at 6:45 AM you just make your words flow so wonderful love always duncan ceizar xxx

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2012 at 6:22 AM oh, and I just read this was a true and recent story Wow.

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2012 at 6:22 AM Very nicely done, Linda. You went from scary to sunshiny happy!!! I wonder if I can use an oldie for this contest. I have one I think that fits the bill!! This is sure to do GREAT in the contest. Keep me posted on your hand surgery, etc.

Ilene Bauer September 9, 2012 at 6:25 PM very powerful images here - i like the way you've described a tornado, which must be so frightening to experience. (there's a typo in the last word - thought you'd want to correct it).

Russell Sivey September 9, 2012 at 12:27 PM This is a very illuminating write my friend! Lightning doesn't have a shot with the quality of this poem that you have written! You have written a fearful few stanzas Linda-Marie followed with a glorious new beginning stanza! This piece will do very well in the contest, I am impressed with the way you approached and rhymed this poem! Glorious Work!!

Jack Horne September 9, 2012 at 8:34 AM wow, awesome descriptions of what must be a terrifying experience. Loved your part of our co-write xxx

Jon A Cavanaugh September 9, 2012 at 5:54 AM Very well done, good job. Two thumbs up

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