Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

Weather Forecast In a Land of Smile

WEATHER FORECAST IN A LAND OF SMILE

Weather forecast for today,
     Country of Thailand, its Stormy,
          Please be careful on your way,
               Cancel your appointments and stay.

Watch the latest news on television,
     Be prepared, that’s everybody’s mission,
          It might be flooded everywhere,
               To those who are travelling.. take care.

Since I have to work on that day,
     I start my morning habit and pray,
          “Please guide me on my way”,
               “I have to do it for the sake of my family”.

As I travel along,
     To school where I belong,
          The sun pop up in the sky,
               And on my face you can see a smile,

Stormy weather turns to sunny,
     Who’s to blame to that news anyway?
          Nobody because it’s forces of nature,
               In a flash it can change for sure.



*3rd Place
*For Joy Wellington's "Weather Forecast" Contest.
*Written by: Maria Paz Samelo
* September 9, 2012

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Kim Merryman October 7, 2012 at 9:46 AM Maria, congrats on your win! I really like how you formatted it. Made it stand out. Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2012 at 11:03 PM Marie, this is such a sweet one. Congrats on your win in this contest!

Joy Wellington October 5, 2012 at 8:03 PM Maria, your outline was the first thing that caught my attention, then I read and was convinced that this was also a winner. Congrats. One love. Joy Wells

Sara Kendrick October 5, 2012 at 1:16 PM Great idea to go with the theme of the contest...Congrats on your win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A October 5, 2012 at 8:09 AM MARIA, congratulations with your awesome "Weather Forecast" poem in Joy's contest... have yourself a good day :-) Love PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 5, 2012 at 5:56 AM Belated congratulations once again, I am sorry these are late I am busy packing and shopping for my holidays xx

Carol Sunshine Brown October 5, 2012 at 5:17 AM Congratulations on your win in Joy's "Weather Forecast" contest Maria. Love Carol

Len Gasun October 5, 2012 at 4:18 AM Congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend, Mary!!!! hugs:) Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong October 5, 2012 at 3:39 AM Congratulations on your win! Weather is always unpredictable as you convey in your poem.

Lorilie Apos September 14, 2012 at 5:35 AM wonderful..!!

Vicky Tsiluma September 12, 2012 at 1:23 AM NICE!!! Very well told! Lovely day to you Maria!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 11, 2012 at 8:08 PM very informative forecast Maria .. full of vast imagery with instructions on how to be safe luv .. best of luck for a big win .. great rhyme ..

Anne-Lise Andresen September 11, 2012 at 10:58 AM The weather forecast is not always to be trusted. Very good written. Have a beautiful day. - Hoping for sunshine :) - Luck in contest ! oxox love Anne-Lise :) Bukang Liwayway September 11, 2012 at 11:29 AM thanks Friend Anne Lise...Have blessed day :)

Len Gasun September 11, 2012 at 12:12 AM Wow!! This is another awesome entry my dear friend. I wish you luck in the contest!!! God bless! hugs ,leonora Bukang Liwayway September 11, 2012 at 11:29 AM thanks dear Nore :) God bless

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2012 at 9:34 PM awesome this is!! It's like mine. I posted an oldie way far back in my files. It won't see the light of day unless it makes the winners' list. haha. Good luck in the contest with your great entry. Bukang Liwayway September 10, 2012 at 9:57 PM thank you so much friend Andrea :) win or lose its ok. Good luck to all your entries in different contest... I have faith in you to win it all. You are one of the great poet here on PS. Cheers!!!

Harry Horsman September 10, 2012 at 9:51 AM love this, Maria, not only is this an excellent poem. but to to taught aspects regarding your country, i like very much. Bukang Liwayway September 10, 2012 at 11:32 AM thanks friend Harry :) good day!!

Dustin Self September 9, 2012 at 7:12 PM Nice job!! I like it friend!! Bukang Liwayway September 9, 2012 at 11:51 PM thanks friend Dustin :)