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Clouds like fat sponges Hiding sun, promising rain Usher in new life For Raul's picture contest "I didn't know it would be so fierce!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/3/2009 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Raul's contest!
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Date: 7/27/2009 1:46:00 PM
Love the "fat sponges" imagery ! Congratulations Frances on your win in Raul's contest. I look forward to reading more of your writing!
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Date: 7/27/2009 1:06:00 PM
Frances, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2009 1:04:00 PM
great title! great winning haiku! Frances! congrats!! jimbo
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Date: 7/25/2009 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Frances. ~Trudy~
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Date: 7/25/2009 2:06:00 AM
Frances, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 7/7/2009 3:07:00 PM
I can see the imagery in this quite clearly. The sponge will have to get a squeeze one day and the water will flow out and down. I am waiting for a good shower of rain. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 7/4/2009 6:14:00 PM
What a insightful perspective captured in just three lines. Nice use of personification. Keep on writing! Karen
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