Yanny Widjanarko Poet Haiku

Weather Cheats

Clouds smile as they shine
Whistling with their odd breezes
Sounds like perfect day

Out from the dark place
Mirroring the other side
Sky ready to cry

Washed up by the rain
Perfect day gone with the wind
Weather cheats on me

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Michael Dom July 11, 2013 at 7:06 AM hey Yanny, I am liking these, especially the weather cheating us :-) Yanny Widjanarko July 11, 2013 at 8:47 PM So the weather also cheats on you? :p wow, hopefully next time it will not do the same thing again on you :D hehehe, glad to have a comment by you Mike :D wishing you a great day there :D hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux July 8, 2013 at 8:51 AM A visit and a poem I havn't read, it is a good day. Take care hugs Rick. I enjoyed reading this piece. Yanny Widjanarko July 8, 2013 at 10:37 AM Thank you Rick I'm happy to have your visit too today :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny

Shirley Candy July 8, 2013 at 8:09 AM Hi Yanny...beautiful chain haiku... salam kenal :) ~Shirley Yanny Widjanarko July 8, 2013 at 8:15 AM Hi Shirley, Salam Kenal juga :) glad to have a comment by you :) hug, yanny

Poet Destroyer A July 6, 2013 at 11:31 PM a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda Yanny Widjanarko July 8, 2013 at 8:14 AM Thanks Linda, glad to see your visit as well :D hug, yanny

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2013 at 8:58 PM this is a great set. I especially enjoyed weather cheats on me! Yanny Widjanarko July 2, 2013 at 12:09 AM Thanks Andrea, it's been a tricky day today, I thought it will be sunny :p glad to see you visit today :D hug, yanny