Weather Cheats

Clouds smile as they shine
Whistling with their odd breezes
Sounds like perfect day

Out from the dark place
Mirroring the other side
Sky ready to cry

Washed up by the rain
Perfect day gone with the wind
Weather cheats on me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 7/11/2013 7:06:00 AM
hey Yanny, I am liking these, especially the weather cheating us :-)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 7/11/2013 8:47:00 PM
So the weather also cheats on you? :p wow, hopefully next time it will not do the same thing again on you :D hehehe, glad to have a comment by you Mike :D wishing you a great day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 7/8/2013 8:51:00 AM
A visit and a poem I havn't read, it is a good day. Take care hugs Rick. I enjoyed reading this piece.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 7/8/2013 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Rick I'm happy to have your visit too today :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 7/8/2013 8:09:00 AM
Hi Yanny...beautiful chain haiku... salam kenal :) ~Shirley
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 7/8/2013 8:15:00 AM
Hi Shirley, Salam Kenal juga :) glad to have a comment by you :) hug, yanny
Date: 7/6/2013 11:31:00 PM
a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 7/8/2013 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Linda, glad to see your visit as well :D hug, yanny
Date: 7/1/2013 8:58:00 PM
this is a great set. I especially enjoyed weather cheats on me!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 7/2/2013 12:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, it's been a tricky day today, I thought it will be sunny :p glad to see you visit today :D hug, yanny
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