Weather

Warm sunny days can turn
  Windy and cold quickly
  When weather becomes wild
  Warping seasons, as a
  Wonderful spring day whirls
  With snowflake's frosty breath
  Which leaves skies gloomy, grey

 5-10-2021
 Pleiades W Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Janice Canerdy

May 20, 2021 at 9:43 AM

A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Joseph! Janice

Jennifer Proxenos

May 16, 2021 at 11:07 AM

Wonderful Pleiades - hope you are well, have been off soup due to work and a nerve wracking incident that happened on our holiday with family be the sea. My latest poem posted. Congratulations on a truly well penned verse. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Howard Kerr

May 14, 2021 at 6:58 PM

Immaculate entry with smooth transitions between lines. Congratulations. Thanks for your review of my work Howard

Eve Roper

May 13, 2021 at 8:42 PM

Great flow in your verse, Joseph , congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve

Mystic Rose Rose

May 13, 2021 at 8:30 AM

Warm breath upon my mind, warm heart, lovely write dear Joseph, winning wishes are being sent on the wings of a butterfly. :)

Sara Kendrick

May 12, 2021 at 12:32 PM

I see that it is a winner. Way to go. I did not enter this contest. I got behind while I was feeling poorly. Enjoyed reading your winning work.Congrats. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

May 11, 2021 at 1:22 PM

you chose your word well and executed this form wonderfully. Congrats.

Kim Merryman

May 11, 2021 at 1:13 PM

Joseph, your portrayal of the weather is fantastic! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

May 11, 2021 at 7:23 PM

Thank you for my placement Kim, I enjoyed your Pleiades Contests..

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 11, 2021 at 12:18 PM

- Congratulations on the best of the season Pleiades, Joseph:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole

May 10, 2021 at 7:02 PM

Oh my ! You have wrapped your thoughts around each season. This is beautiful. I especially like: "Warm sunny days" My heart is smiling. :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

May 10, 2021 at 3:33 PM

Very pretty, Joseph!

Victor Buhagiar

May 10, 2021 at 10:26 AM

So very true. May has been horrible this year. Lovely Pleiades though.

Heidi Sands

May 10, 2021 at 8:09 AM

I sure know what cold Springs feel like. Well written Joseph :)

Daniel Turner

May 10, 2021 at 5:23 AM

I would rather spend a day at the beach than build a snowman. I am a warm weather person. I was raised to be outside and I still love it. A good entry, Joseph. Good luck!