Weakness

Work; worry;
Everyday!
Action ~ reaction!
Kindness? Never!
Needs not met.
Eventual eruption!
Somebody WILL
suffer!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 18, 2009 at 10:09 AM
Patricia, this struck a chord as so many worked hard for years only to lose their jobs in this recession. Excellent work. You might find some similarities in "Mr. Mark." Carolyn
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