Weakling

 Written for the contest "Poe in the style of Plath" sponsored by Tom Woody 

 I am a weakling against supremely star-studded skies
Where stolen streams of light are not enough for it to uprise
My warrior soul is on knees, as sour scars cut very deep
The vinegary wounds in my veins can cause stones to weep

To cross this apocalyptic abyss, I only have frightened might
Avalanche of agony has hit volcanic edge of my perilous plight
No savior comes to the rescue, as I lay with my frozen fears
Fighting, fighting eversince, I found no way past trail of tears

Am I a cowardly creature just to ask for a breath of peace?
Too many of rainbows before my eyes, I can't tell apart malice
Too numb to flap wings of hope only, so I lied in my poems oftentimes
Not a melody of glazed strings, life sounds a lot like rusty rhymes 


I hope I met the requirements of the challenge. I have read a few of Poe's and Plath's poems only, I just hope I was able to do justice to keep the macabre vibes of both of these poets' writing style. Thank you for this wonderful contest Tom!
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November 27, 2023 at 7:39 AM
You did very well with the theme here, I have not thought about how I will approach this one... I can see a lot of vulnerability and self deprecation in your character, which is fitting for both Plath and Poe.. Many great lines about being a cowardly creature.. good luck in the contest..
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November 29, 2023 at 1:49 AM
Aww thank you so much for giving this a read brother.. I just tried my best I could to merge styles of both of these poets. Sounded like a great challenge.. I am really excited to read your take on this one as well!
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