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Weak Spots Xii

Emerging in the dark, A pale ghost cast by the moon— Authenticity— With the glow of rawness and power The song of truth so precious On a tongue that is pressed for Change—submissive change— Cradled in the prospects of devotion The clouds covering the perfect circles Penetrating through a lens That magnifies true, imminent light Of gleaming giants in velveteen skies Fearless revelations That accomplish alluring awe The conundrums of life Beyond us—beyond words—in us 2.12.20 Note: Those alluring mysteries...in us...if only we knew how to reveal them like the thin clouds reveal the soft circular shape of that glowing moon, as it floats so carefree... yet so purposefully in the sky. I like to compare our vulnerabilities and our abilities to the universe. They are vast, and can reveal such beautiful things about us.

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Date: 1/11/2021 2:14:00 PM
You got me high Laura, so very high on your love spirit..."On a tongue that is pressed for change, submissive change, cradled in prospects of devotion..." that's velveteen beauty Poetess...Justin...FAV!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/13/2021 3:52:00 AM
So happy you see the beauty in this series, Justin. Sending much love your way <3 ~Laura

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