Laura Breidenthal Poet Romanticism

Weak Spots Xi

Anticipation in an eye gaze
Before the plunge between 
Lips and skin—
The vulnerable way into the heart

A rush that gushes through 
Every avenue of the frame
As a scent causes thrills that hide 
Not long enough to be secret

Hands over hands 
Soft skin wrapped in soft skin
A trace of fear—a reminder—
This is not a fantasy

This is real—laughter and doting—
Touches—more gushes and thrills—
Goosebumps forming on the flesh, 
The gaze returning in full blaze

2.11.20

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Justin Bordner January 11, 2021 at 1:29 PM <*>

Justin Bordner January 6, 2021 at 5:09 PM This poem of sumptuous ebullience makes me think about defying the odds, finishing strong as in 2020, and doing it with love...this poem literally describes how I finished 2020, with you in my corner Poetess, thank you :)...Justin Justin Bordner January 11, 2021 at 1:29 PM Sexy courage... Laura Breidenthal January 6, 2021 at 11:24 PM Finishing strong and starting strong...love must always lead..my mantra this year is Love over Fear. ~Laura

Mystic Rose Rose January 3, 2021 at 5:35 PM I always loved your sensual writes Laura. Its nice to read your poetry once again. Praying that all is well, by you, Love and light. xo Laura Breidenthal January 3, 2021 at 7:57 PM Sending you much love! Thank you for being you. Thank you for your prayers. Wishing you a happy new year..~Laura