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Weak Spots Xi

Anticipation in an eye gaze Before the plunge between Lips and skin— The vulnerable way into the heart A rush that gushes through Every avenue of the frame As a scent causes thrills that hide Not long enough to be secret Hands over hands Soft skin wrapped in soft skin A trace of fear—a reminder— This is not a fantasy This is real—laughter and doting— Touches—more gushes and thrills— Goosebumps forming on the flesh, The gaze returning in full blaze 2.11.20

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Date: 1/11/2021 1:29:00 PM
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Date: 1/6/2021 5:09:00 PM
This poem of sumptuous ebullience makes me think about defying the odds, finishing strong as in 2020, and doing it with love...this poem literally describes how I finished 2020, with you in my corner Poetess, thank you :)...Justin
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/11/2021 1:29:00 PM
Sexy courage...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/6/2021 11:24:00 PM
Finishing strong and starting strong...love must always lead..my mantra this year is Love over Fear. ~Laura
Date: 1/3/2021 5:35:00 PM
I always loved your sensual writes Laura. Its nice to read your poetry once again. Praying that all is well, by you, Love and light. xo
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/3/2021 7:57:00 PM
Sending you much love! Thank you for being you. Thank you for your prayers. Wishing you a happy new year..~Laura

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