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Weak Spots V

Spurting colors in a sunset sky, The look of absolute wonder in the eye As the last of the sun descends, The lingering light tickling trembling waves Embraces in a thrashing storm, Nighttime sharpening the senses, An apology accentuating sincerity, Sighs of relief parting the lips The sound of trust on the tongue, The joining of hands in times of fear, Sorrow in a child's hopeful eyes Anger aimed to protect Nostalgic memories relived, Warm blankets over shivering limbs The vast movement of the moon, Growing light approaching fullness 2.5.2020 Note: What are your weak spots?

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Date: 1/2/2021 6:44:00 PM
The mature sensuality of spirit in this poem is truly extraordinary Laura. That 2nd stanza is Hot...its hot...pardon me, I'm frickin FAVing this Poem!...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/3/2021 6:42:00 AM
So happy this one could excite you so...there are quite a few more to come. It's so encouraging to hear from you - you are a treasure to me! ~Laura
Date: 1/2/2021 6:38:00 PM
Love for you...
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/3/2021 11:51:00 AM
(: @ :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/3/2021 6:39:00 AM
It's a mutual weakness..~Laura

Book: Shattered Sighs