Weak

The the ones who think my work is weak
I have to say your at your peak

I am a newbie in this world of art
You will fall hard before i even get my start

If you don't like my work don't read it
Learn to grow up you idiot





to the ppl that hate my WORK... its my style... get used to it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Knox Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 1:44 PM
haha.. is this the one you were talking about the other day? i like it:)
Gumbo Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:51 AM
my dear Zach, don't pay attention to such words from such folks. Your writing has a wonderful style, fresh, honest, sincere and lovely. Keep writing my friend because for those who 'dont like your work'.... you have a fan club who loves it! :) Keep writing from your heart! We read and enjoy you.
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:59 AM
Thats tellin them brother peple who run others work just hate everything to start with really good use of words and great flow good job
Washington Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:26 AM
haah TOTALLLLLLLY niiiiiiice haha i agree very much so =]] loving it zachy poo=]]TinkBabyy
K Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 9:25 AM
Well I am certainly not one of those people, I find your work amazing and a true inspiration...don't listen to anybody who tells you otherwise -Jessica
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