We Worn a Race

WE WORN A RACE

Sited around the fading fire
With broken wills and glowing shame
They walk the  darkness
Burden with stiffened hopes 
They trudge ahead 
With a shorten vision
They soon lost the sun
With no dazzling rays 
And no mingling heat
They settled in a long struggle
Amidst so much trouble
They miss the days’ future
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 5:27 AM
Creative work. Kind of sad. Sara K
Campbell Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 3:08 PM
Thank you, much appreciated.
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January 16, 2025 at 8:07 PM
Well written brings you right into the story.
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January 18, 2025 at 11:49 AM
Thank you, much appreciated.
Greener Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 1:17 PM
I enjoyed this poem, it has depth
Campbell Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 1:28 PM
Hi Dexter Greener, I am glad you enjoyed the poem, thank you.
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