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We Were Not Promised Another Day

As I look in the distance I see the new grave. It's a realization As feelings come to me in a tidal wave Of how much companionship and love you gave With out any hesitation. As I look in the distance I see the new grave. I am trying to be brave To cope with this sudden separation As feelings come to me in a tidal wave. I really don't know how to behave. I have never lost any one who meant so much Yet wasn't a blood relation. As I look in the distance I see the new grave. I can only say don't cave. Last year was our greatest vacation As feelings come to me in a tidal wave. Oh! Dave. How will I make it through this new transition With out your cooperation? As I look in the distance I see the new grave As feelings come to me in a tidal wave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/12/2018 2:04:00 PM
Hello Bette, you must have been emotional when crating this poem. I found it a bit emotional as i read this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Bette Bavington
Date: 11/20/2018 2:53:00 PM
Darlene thank you so very much for the hug. It means a lot.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/14/2018 6:17:00 PM
I sensed your sadness in this poem. you need a hug.O this is a hug.
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Bette Bavington
Date: 11/12/2018 7:30:00 PM
It was hard not to be emotional. We never know when It will be our time to go. In a blink of an eye he was no more. It was a sad day.
Date: 11/4/2018 4:21:00 PM
Excellent creativity, Bette.. Really enjoyed reading.. Brava!! Blessings, my friend..
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Bette Bavington
Date: 11/4/2018 8:40:00 PM
Thank you so much.