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We Stare and Stare

We stare and stare, we strain our eyes, Pointing telescopes towards the sky, Hoping, one day to see Our origins or our destiny. Like ants attempting Everest, Unlikely, yet we try our best, For surely there are more than we, And if we look, there may well be Others looking towards their sky, Who stare and stare, and strain their eyes. Entry for The Universe Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nina Parmenter. 2/7/2019

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Date: 7/8/2019 1:29:00 PM
love what you did with this... the opening and closing all tied up nicely :) Congratulations!
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/8/2019 2:17:00 PM
Thank you P.S. :)
Date: 7/8/2019 12:22:00 PM
I think this one's my favourite :)))) Congratulations for your win Gary! xomo
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/8/2019 12:33:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. :)
Date: 7/8/2019 2:32:00 AM
Gary congrats on your win!;)
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/8/2019 2:58:00 AM
Thank you Brenda. :)
Date: 7/7/2019 6:33:00 PM
Oh, I love how your beautiful musings come full circle with your last two lines, Gary. Such an enchanting piece . Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/8/2019 2:57:00 AM
Thank you Susan. :)
Date: 7/7/2019 4:51:00 PM
Love the way you mirror-imaged this. So eloquently done and rhymed, Gary. Congrats on your win in Nina's contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/7/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. :)
Date: 7/7/2019 3:33:00 PM
this is an excellent take on the theme, Gary. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/7/2019 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. :)
Date: 7/7/2019 11:50:00 AM
Mostly I like the comparison of ants climbing everest! Congratulations, Gary!
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/7/2019 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Kim. :)
Date: 7/7/2019 10:10:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Gary! Janice
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/7/2019 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Janice. :)
Date: 7/7/2019 9:34:00 AM
Lovely, Gary. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/17/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Line. :)

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