We Rock

"WHERE EVER WE ARE BORN, 
 WHERE EVER WE MAY LIVE!
 WE ARE ONE - WE UNDERSTAND!"

We stand together against injustice.
We don't discriminate, we stand for each one in society.
We love, we understand, we cooperate.
We never hesitate in extending help.
We never calculate, we don't follow give and take.
We are intelligent, we work hard.
                          
We are the best!

YES! WE ROCK!

STILL THERE ARE A FEW CHANGES, WE NEED TO MAKE OURSELVES FLAWLESS AND PERFECT!

(My personal understanding and analysis.)

It's not an advice; just for you! 
It's equally applicable to all and to me too!



Twitter, Facebook, Instagram,
We are more into living a virtual life.
Wake up and come out dude!

And be FLAW - FREE! 
Let's be!  Let's be FLAW - FREE!

Money and Gadgets and Comfort and Ease,
Let’s not be so focused,  ruthless and selfish!

Live your life and be FLAW - FREE!
Let's be!  Let's be FLAW - FREE!

Technology, Knowledge and Expertise is our asset,
Let’s not treat elders as liability, junk and illiterate! 

Respect them and just be FLAW - FREE!
Let's be!  Let's be FLAW - FREE!

Live ins and Relations are trending,
Let’s also maintain limits and dignity set by the society.

 Freedom and Integrity....... and be FLAW - FREE! 

Yes, we are the voice,  we know our rights.
Responsibilities!...let's not lag behind! 

Just do your due and be FLAW - FREE!
Let's be!  Let's be FLAW - FREE!

Fear less, Straight forward, logical or may be a bit rude, 
We speak up for justice on many issues.
And may be reactive and immature!
We have got better brains, Come on let’s put it to better use!

And just be FLAW - FREE! 
Let's be!  Let's be FLAW - FREE! 

Drugs, Smoke and Drinks; that’s a fad…an essential part of THE Swag!
Maintaining moral values and ethics is necessary to save us from fall and defeat.

Open your eyes and keep climbing to be FLAW - FREE! 
Let's be!  Let's be FLAW - FREE!

What about Inner satisfaction, Self respect, Fame and Dignity?
YES, not to others! In the end we are answerable to ourselves at least!

Look into the mirror and say,  we are FLAW - FREE!!
YES!  PERFECT AND FLAW - FREE!  

Date: 25th December; 2020
YOUR ADVICE TO THE YOUTH POETRY CONTEST 
SPONSORED BY: EDWARD  IBEH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/30/2020 7:50:00 PM
I am back to congratulate you, Aditi, on your placement for this great piece of advice to young writers!! Wish you a Very Happy New Year!!
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Date: 12/31/2020 3:33:00 AM
Thank-you so much for your kind appreciation. Wishing you and your family a very prosperous, hale and hearty year ahead. HAPPY NEW YEAR
Date: 12/30/2020 7:15:00 PM
Yes you'll certainly Rock and Superbly at that...Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 12/31/2020 3:33:00 AM
Thank-you so much for your kind appreciation. Wishing you and your family a very prosperous, hale and hearty year ahead. HAPPY NEW YEAR
Date: 12/30/2020 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Aditi!
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Aditi Sheemar
Date: 12/31/2020 3:33:00 AM
Thank-you so much for your kind appreciation. Wishing you and your family a very prosperous, hale and hearty year ahead. HAPPY NEW YEAR
Date: 12/30/2020 1:01:00 PM
Not exactly what I was looking for but I love how you wrote this from the perspective of today's youth. Well-written and unique, Aditi:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 12/31/2020 3:31:00 AM
Thank-you so much for your kind appreciation. Wishing you and your family a very prosperous, hale and hearty year ahead. HAPPY NEW YEAR
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