Pipping Stars Poet Lyric

We Met Her

we met her
we met her
in
an
younger time

her thoughts have
always
lingered
on my mind

she was caught
in
an
braille net
wondering
from
the
blind

said i
said i
said we met her
laying down
on
the
pedals
of
an rose

we met her
now my love
puts on
an
star lit
light show

we met her
dancing
in
the
reflection
guiding moonbeam affection

we met her
we met her
we met her here
we met her there
space between our kisses
has conquered
the
suns
glare

shoot me
from
an
open
flame
teach me
to whisper
her
name

unchanged
my life
just
an
occur till
we met her
?

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Maria Williams December 25, 2017 at 9:14 PM This is just constructive correction here, but can I suggest that you change 'an' to 'a' before rose, and the again "an" to "a" before 'star lit light show?' Otherwise its perfect. Great poem.....Maria Pipping Stars December 26, 2017 at 6:49 AM an sounds better in our head ... only thing that has an a in our book is an knuckle sammich ... corrctly stated ... collective of corrective ... try an correct all we have collected ... corrective criticisms ... he he ha ...