We Girls Love Pearls

Painful grain of sand
making something beautiful
on ocean bottom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 7:17 AM
nice description.. :) it's true how tricky will it be to find good quality pearls along oceans.. :)
Michaels Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 4:46 AM
What a great poem. Whilst capturing the essence of the moment, it mirrors the "out of pain comes beauty" of bringing new life into the world. Thank you for sharing!
Devereau Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Thanks John for your nice comments...
Sietesantos Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 1:56 AM
Great write - well done, Noelle!
Devereau Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:57 AM
Thank you so much for your nice comments...Noelle
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 3:38 AM
- SPARKLING GEM, NOELLE !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Devereau Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Thank you for your nice comment ....Noelle
Sharma Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:09 PM
:) I too love pearls and you have beautifully described their unique transformation.
Devereau Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Thank you for the nice comments...Noelle
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 2:46 PM
Very descriptive work that you have penned in this Haiku..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Welcome to soup..Sara
Devereau Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 3:02 PM
Thank you so much for your welcome and your nice comments...Noelle
Lindley Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Great write my friend. Having once dated a girl named Pearl I can attest to both the beauty and also the pain part as well. Fabulous write!! Bravo!!!
Devereau Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Hi Robert, Thank you for your nice comments...Noelle
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:33 AM
So few words creating an incredibly beautiful vision. Hugs Jan xxx
Devereau Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Thanks so much for the nice comments...I really appreciate them...Noelle
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Much like people, the pain we survive adds to the beautiful we become.
Devereau Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 8:10 PM
You are absolutely right...thanks for the comments...Noelle
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