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We don’t hate each other; we’re just numb, naked, and nostalgic!

The world burns apart, like paper over candle. The only breaking point that this planet couldn't handle. Something turns to nothing and that nothing's what remains, that nothing turns to something and that something turns to days. Days are made of moments. Moments; made of you, moments make up hours and together we make two. We co-create a world and pretend we're here forever, let's break apart the pieces come on, let's tear it down together! This world was made to murder us this world was made of fire, we were born to join a homicide and born pre-expired. Time didn't want us, we pretend we're here forever, let's break apart the pieces come on, let's tear it down together! Our minds are vast and lonely instant pleasure keeps us lifted, it's no wonder every human has to leave this world addicted. God loves junkies more then pastors We leave first, He knows us better. lets break apart the pieces come on, let's tear it down together! You're simple and distracting, I say "I love you" out of habit. I pawned your love to get us high And you still humanized my addict. I’ll leave behind my needle And you can wear that dress forever. Our purpose in this world is simple; let's tear it down, you and I.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/11/2016 10:12:00 PM
divine in every line
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Date: 4/11/2016 10:58:00 PM
Appreciate you taking the time to read some of my work! Thank you!
Date: 4/11/2016 10:12:00 PM
divine in every line
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:04:00 AM
Good job of portraying your inner feelings. I liked the honesty!
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Patrick Farley Iv
Date: 8/6/2013 10:32:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed the honest of this poem. thank you!
Date: 8/6/2013 7:08:00 AM
- A proficient poem Patrick, well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Patrick Farley Iv
Date: 8/6/2013 10:31:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/5/2013 7:50:00 PM
What can I say... exceptional poetry Patrick! Cheers!
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Patrick Farley Iv
Date: 8/6/2013 6:03:00 AM
Thank you jack! Much appreciated
Date: 8/5/2013 5:21:00 PM
Very impressive poetic talent..you rocked your subject perfectly......love the energy you reflect:)
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Patrick Farley Iv
Date: 8/5/2013 5:29:00 PM
Thanks Karen! I'm glad you felt that energy
Date: 8/5/2013 2:56:00 AM
wow i am wowed at the use of words and the depths of the whole!beautiful job
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Date: 8/5/2013 5:29:00 PM
Thank you for reading and the compliment! I appreciate it!

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