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We Call It Time

We lose when we love, retain the dripping remnants of losses we keep. We call it time, but cease to count the raging moments of a sandstorm when it cries. And then we say goodbye, a final soreness of heart that in braveness, says "no"...

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Date: 4/22/2016 5:28:00 PM
Lovely
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Date: 8/12/2013 9:03:00 AM
Oh what a wonderful poem. "retain the dripping remnants " A very beautiful line.
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Date: 8/12/2013 1:14:00 PM
Thanks, Christine. This was particularly heartfelt as the poem is about the one year anniversary of losing my best friend. And it kinda hurt.

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