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We Breathe

Spring‘s gone, Summer days, Autumns hues of crimson and gold, will soon replace. Silently, I gaze from secret place Consumed by memories Of happiness shared of you and me, Snowy days spent by the fire Entangled souls seemingly We beat the odds with evenness Blissfully… In this present moment, a longing touch rises within Where giddy hearts still afire Passionately so… In an instant, It begins to rain within, I sigh, you sigh -- We Breathe…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/28/2008 5:20:00 AM
This is a captivating read. It makes one remember fondly those certain times and moments of shared love as reminisced upon during changes in nature. Wonderfully composed. Michael
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Date: 8/27/2008 9:30:00 PM
Adell my dear, this is so charming. I just love it. I like "snowy days spent by the fire." Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 8/27/2008 6:44:00 PM
Adell this is a simply marvelous poem - Beautiful from beginning to end - a pleasure to read - God Bless
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Date: 8/27/2008 6:18:00 PM
Sweet. Soft. Just a plain old fashioned beautiful write. Vince
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Date: 8/27/2008 4:55:00 PM
this pome has a great flow and well write and a real joy to read God bless
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