We Are Unique

The hammer teaches us how to play
Bed of stones beckoning with the hand
The cries of my younger's provide energy
Work hard for a bread
Though I am a kid
Yet mature!

Metallic sounds,
Drops from dry bones,
Cool my body.

Father doesn't know us
Maybe He is reading my face!
Mom is too ill to work

Her kind hands,
Fight with a hammer,
Do hard in the battle of betrothal
Silent Cries
And Her worthy love
Matures me.
You can again betray with Her daughter!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 1:49 PM
Litan Such a powerful, deep and heart wrenching poem. I could feel the emotion in each line coming from your heart and soul. Thank you for the great comment on my Lies And Guys poem.
Dey Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 3:47 AM
Yes! That was from heart...Thanks a lot for your nice comment
A  Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Litan, you are a good poet. Congratulations.....SKAT
Dey Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 11:10 PM
Thanks skat...no doubt you are also a good writer,Have a nice sunday
Taylor Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Congrats - Nice going. Ralph
Dey Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 9:14 PM
Thank you so much ralph for passing by and appreciation.
Kendrick Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 12:20 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win in the contest..Soup Mail soon..Sara
Dey Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 12:32 PM
Thank you sara for your appreciation.......
Dey Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 8:29 AM
Thanks Morgan and Dr. Mehta for your nice visit to my work and appreciation....
Morgan Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 4:30 AM
Congrats on your win.Morgan
Mehta Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 3:56 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, Litan
A   Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 6:09 PM
Hi Litan, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""The Wind."" OR blog! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda
Dey Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 8:30 PM
Thank you PD.....have a relaxed weakened.
Beaufort Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 6:57 AM
Sounds like this is part of a hard life, but you take a lot from each experience and are very perceptive.
A   Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Litan, this poem is deep....xox..Linda
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 3:04 AM
- Lovely poem, Litan ... you write very well (child .. lol). . All the best to you, my dear friend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dey Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 11:44 PM
Thank you for call me a child and for nice visit to your child's work.Have a good day
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