Get Your Premium Membership

We Are the Universe

Life seems to be so empty, I see dark sky, destroyed ground that is abandoned... Colorless world, only black and gray, lost wishes, unfounded dreams... I only feel this when I'm awake.... But.... When I'm a sleep... I see trees dancing on the rhythm of your beating heart... Birds whispering a symphony that only you and me can understand... Water flows smoothly, touching the soft rocks down in the river so tender... The whole universe has his own rhythm while you have your own... Gentile wind covers our bodies like a soft , warm blanket... And your lips..oh ..Your lips... I feel the sweetness of blueberry in them - so smooth - so soft - so tender.. Ah...my demons suduse me to taste them , to bite them and never let go of you... When you cross your fingers upon my skin , you break my bones , you set fire in my soul, you make blood revels through my veins... You control me , can't help myself .. Don't know if I'm awake or asleep anymore... But I don't care... I want to stay in your flawless world whether it's fake or real... As long as I'm with you I can live my life time not asking for anything else but your love.... Carry me on your waves and take me to your breathless shelter... Let's hide there and stay there for ever .. Let's grow old - let's live our life - our wishes - our dreams... Let's forget about the world , why would we care about the world when we're the universe ....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/12/2016 7:05:00 AM
excellent write Dalia, passionate...you've written this with such strong expressions
Login to Reply
Shahein Avatar
Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/13/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear for ur supportive and powerful sweet words they mean so much , hugs / / :)
Date: 12/18/2015 7:16:00 AM
Great romantic write. Closing was very strong and overall a most beautiful piece !A7
Login to Reply
Shahein Avatar
Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/18/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thank you very much for your lovely , sweet sweet comment I really appreciate it and glad you've stopped by....hugs / / :D
Date: 12/6/2015 1:28:00 AM
This is a declaration of desire that defines the touch of romance Dalia! Yes, never let go of the body of love that carries you through the swell of passion's thick and pounding tides! The sweet sensuality that surrounds the body of firm fidelity is so sincere and seductive. Let love be your strength, refuge, and resolute happiness my Violet Poetess. Mmmm...your bite feels so right, to be your partner in paradise so natural. Bite my heart and body all night long!! J.A.B.
Login to Reply
Shahein Avatar
Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/6/2015 4:52:00 AM
Oh my sweet justin...thank you for the very very sweet and unique comment u impress me and capture me every time with ur sweetness...I'm so grateful that I have some one like u who can read my poems and understand them so well ...I believe we share the same passion in love and romance....so glad and delighted that u have enjoyed reading it ...I'm really truly honored... Lot of love and hugs... :D
Bordner Avatar
Justin Bordner
Date: 12/6/2015 1:31:00 AM
I'm taking this passion into my Dreamland tonight...and it will remain in the breath of my heart...Justin
Date: 12/5/2015 7:46:00 PM
"Carry me on your waves and take me to your breathless shelter" This is such a beautiful passage, my dear Dalia! I am honoured to meet you and become your friend! Love, Jack!!! xox
Login to Reply
Shahein Avatar
Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/5/2015 8:01:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear for ur delightful, sweet comment I really do appreciate it and I'm so glad that you liked it as much I'm honored to be ur friend...lot of love and hugs.. :D

Book: Shattered Sighs