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We Are Spinning

subconscious obsessions sexual repressions melting sun lea- ning on time exploding watches organic contour of a dreaming virgin merging and moulding we are spinning and orbiting unaware

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/7/2016 3:07:00 PM

Dear Francis In this piece you make your readers spin with thoughts to ponder, as one settles we capture sight of the marvelous images that you wish us to experience, awesome inspirational work here, young master, and thanks for your visit to my site, you have a great week ahead, cheri

Francis Osho
Date: 3/7/2016 8:22:00 PM

young master is 55. ty cheri

Alex Roth

Date: 3/6/2016 7:42:00 AM

You use a syllable break here to express what the word is saying. I do that in my poetry as well. Great work.

Francis Osho
Date: 3/6/2016 7:51:00 AM

i noticed. ty alex