We Are Spinning

subconscious obsessions
sexual repressions
melting sun lea-
ning on time
exploding watches
organic contour
of a dreaming
virgin
merging and moulding
we are spinning and
orbiting unaware
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dunn Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Dear Francis In this piece you make your readers spin with thoughts to ponder, as one settles we capture sight of the marvelous images that you wish us to experience, awesome inspirational work here, young master, and thanks for your visit to my site, you have a great week ahead, cheri
Osho Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 8:22 PM
young master is 55. ty cheri
Roth Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 7:42 AM
You use a syllable break here to express what the word is saying. I do that in my poetry as well. Great work.
Osho Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 7:51 AM
i noticed. ty alex
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