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We Are Not Immortal, Child

"Enter through the narrow gate. For wide is the gate and broad is the road that leads to destruction, and many enter through it. But small is the gate and narrow the road that leads to life, and only a few find it." ~Matthew 7:13-14 NIV

We are not immortal, child,
and you have done your share 
of running wild.

Running until you hit that wall, child,
there are only two paths through 
which way will you fall?

He has let you play awhile, child,
but in the end your soul laid bare,
with tears of sorrow; there's no tomorrow.
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Greenhough Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 8:14 PM
I liked this. There is a moral lesson inside this poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 9:37 AM
What a lovely/powerful write you have here. So True... "Great Picture" Love how you added Matthew 7:13-14 NIV. Have a blessed day as you write away................
Seeker Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 9:23 PM
I detect a pensive mood in this contemplation for truth search
Achara Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 9:49 PM
I do have fewer days ahead of me than I have behind me, and even though I accepted Jesus as my savior 38 years ago, I still ponder...
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