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We Are Imperfect, We Are Human

Awake in dark shade You tried to walk on your call Fearful dominate You live unsteady Well, life lessons full of pain You tried to survive You said you cannot We have a quota of each God is fair enough You cry on your pray Demanding on happiness See what you have got We forgot the thanks We remember the ache Selfishness of human

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Harry Horsman

Date: 5/16/2013 8:46:00 AM

love these Yanny, says so much about you, and it is all beautiful and good...

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/16/2013 9:24:00 AM

Thank you Harry, the title inspired me to write about this, I picked it from my brother in law status in Blackberry :D wishing you a lovely day there :D hug, yanny

Michael Dom

Date: 4/21/2013 11:58:00 PM

Hard hitting lines in this haiku, Yanny. Reminds me of my own; "I am perfectly flawed / And framed in pain".

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/16/2013 9:23:00 AM

Thank you Michael, I'm also have a feel that I am perfectly flawed :p wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug,yanny

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/27/2013 7:17:00 AM

We are all imperfect and in the imperfection is beauty. I enjoyed your Poem. Check out my poem from yesterday Comic Relief.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/27/2013 8:50:00 AM

Thank you very much Rick I am very happy to read your poem, and it really works to make my mood :D wishing you a lovely day Rick :D hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/26/2013 11:05:00 AM

No one is perfect Yanny, and it is both good and bad. - We just do our best. - Thanks for your well written poem, I like it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/27/2013 8:49:00 AM

This poem was inspired by my brother in law status in his black berry, I thought this is very interesting thought that he said "I'm not perfect, I am human" , thank you for your lovely visit Anne, wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, yanny