Yanny Widjanarko Poet Haiku

We Are Imperfect, We Are Human

Awake in dark shade
You tried to walk on your call
Fearful dominate

You live unsteady
Well, life lessons full of pain
You tried to survive

You said you cannot
We have a quota of each
God is fair enough

You cry on your pray
Demanding on happiness
See what you have got

We forgot the thanks
We remember the ache
Selfishness of human

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Harry Horsman May 16, 2013 at 8:46 AM love these Yanny, says so much about you, and it is all beautiful and good... Yanny Widjanarko May 16, 2013 at 9:24 AM Thank you Harry, the title inspired me to write about this, I picked it from my brother in law status in Blackberry :D wishing you a lovely day there :D hug, yanny

Michael Dom April 21, 2013 at 11:58 PM Hard hitting lines in this haiku, Yanny. Reminds me of my own; "I am perfectly flawed / And framed in pain". Yanny Widjanarko May 16, 2013 at 9:23 AM Thank you Michael, I'm also have a feel that I am perfectly flawed :p wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug,yanny

Richard Lamoureux March 27, 2013 at 7:17 AM We are all imperfect and in the imperfection is beauty. I enjoyed your Poem. Check out my poem from yesterday Comic Relief. Yanny Widjanarko March 27, 2013 at 8:50 AM Thank you very much Rick I am very happy to read your poem, and it really works to make my mood :D wishing you a lovely day Rick :D hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2013 at 11:05 AM No one is perfect Yanny, and it is both good and bad. - We just do our best. - Thanks for your well written poem, I like it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Yanny Widjanarko March 27, 2013 at 8:49 AM This poem was inspired by my brother in law status in his black berry, I thought this is very interesting thought that he said "I'm not perfect, I am human" , thank you for your lovely visit Anne, wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, yanny