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We Are Being Watched.

I Am is watching. God is watching. Allah is watching. Jehovah is watching. all with the same eyes all with the same heart all with the same mind watching you, you and you everything you do yes you. you pervert. you killing machine. you false god. God is watching you.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/5/2009 12:28:00 PM

Have not visited you in a while, but I praise you for keeping up the fight ... Jehovah be praised.

Alley Poe

Date: 5/20/2009 4:49:00 PM

Intense!!!! -Alley

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/20/2009 4:07:00 PM

dear friend-i am watching,got it wrong--i know understand it--I AM--GOD is watching,thanks for your inspiration you gave me to understand,its even stronger now,this poem is strong john,i reread it---charma

Jessica K

Date: 5/20/2009 6:33:00 AM

It is amazing........great poem!

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/19/2009 4:27:00 PM

I just noticed almost everyone here commented twice. Hmm...I am trying to think of how this poem makes me feel. Like there will be justice in the end. Yes. Love the repetition making your point. Love, Shar

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/19/2009 4:19:00 PM

i read this again and i comment again-- i am is watching;-),you can watch,i watch you too,good friend and i read your verses even before i sleep when you tag me--;-)goodnight its late here--charma

Sandra Hudson

Date: 5/19/2009 4:14:00 PM

I'm not hiding, I'm not hiding, I love your factual actuals.-AA

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/19/2009 4:57:00 AM

God is watching us,hope we give him the best of our hearts and wont be false gods to him or to anyone,deep and wonderfully penned dear good friend--charma

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/18/2009 9:37:00 PM

Nicely put John. God Bless Phyl

Sandra Hudson

Date: 5/18/2009 6:53:00 PM

You are the only man I know who can see the world from around corners. Your poetic vision is phenominal!-AA

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/18/2009 5:24:00 PM

John III, These sentiments are mine exactly. You have put it so well here. Wonderful insight and well written. God bless you. Love, Dane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2009 4:09:00 PM

We can call our Lord God, Allah or Jehovah, but as you say, they all have the same eyes, heart and mind. Very nice, John! (The tag game seems to be moving along well! Thanks for letting me play.)