John Loving Iii Poet I do not know?

We Are Being Watched.

I Am is watching.
God is watching. 
Allah is watching.
Jehovah is watching.
all with the same eyes
all with the same heart
all with the same mind
watching you, you and you
everything you do
yes you.
you pervert. 
you killing machine.
you false god. 
God is watching you.

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L'Nass Shango June 5, 2009 at 12:28 PM Have not visited you in a while, but I praise you for keeping up the fight ... Jehovah be praised.

Alley Poe May 20, 2009 at 4:49 PM Intense!!!! -Alley

Charmaine Chircop May 20, 2009 at 4:07 PM dear friend-i am watching,got it wrong--i know understand it--I AM--GOD is watching,thanks for your inspiration you gave me to understand,its even stronger now,this poem is strong john,i reread it---charma

Jessica K May 20, 2009 at 6:33 AM It is amazing........great poem!

Sharon Winter May 19, 2009 at 4:27 PM I just noticed almost everyone here commented twice. Hmm...I am trying to think of how this poem makes me feel. Like there will be justice in the end. Yes. Love the repetition making your point. Love, Shar

Charmaine Chircop May 19, 2009 at 4:19 PM i read this again and i comment again-- i am is watching;-),you can watch,i watch you too,good friend and i read your verses even before i sleep when you tag me--;-)goodnight its late here--charma

Sandra Hudson May 19, 2009 at 4:14 PM I'm not hiding, I'm not hiding, I love your factual actuals.-AA

Charmaine Chircop May 19, 2009 at 4:57 AM God is watching us,hope we give him the best of our hearts and wont be false gods to him or to anyone,deep and wonderfully penned dear good friend--charma

Phyllis Babcock May 18, 2009 at 9:37 PM Nicely put John. God Bless Phyl

Sandra Hudson May 18, 2009 at 6:53 PM You are the only man I know who can see the world from around corners. Your poetic vision is phenominal!-AA

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 18, 2009 at 5:24 PM John III, These sentiments are mine exactly. You have put it so well here. Wonderful insight and well written. God bless you. Love, Dane

Carolyn Devonshire May 18, 2009 at 4:09 PM We can call our Lord God, Allah or Jehovah, but as you say, they all have the same eyes, heart and mind. Very nice, John! (The tag game seems to be moving along well! Thanks for letting me play.)