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We Are Being Watched.

I Am is watching.
God is watching. 
Allah is watching.
Jehovah is watching.
all with the same eyes
all with the same heart
all with the same mind
watching you, you and you
everything you do
yes you.
you pervert. 
you killing machine.
you false god. 
God is watching you.

Copyright © John Loving Iii | Year Posted 2009

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L'Nass Shango Date: 6/5/2009 12:28:00 PM Have not visited you in a while, but I praise you for keeping up the fight ... Jehovah be praised. Login to Reply

Alley Poe Date: 5/20/2009 4:49:00 PM Intense!!!! -Alley Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/20/2009 4:07:00 PM dear friend-i am watching,got it wrong--i know understand it--I AM--GOD is watching,thanks for your inspiration you gave me to understand,its even stronger now,this poem is strong john,i reread it---charma Login to Reply

Jessica K Date: 5/20/2009 6:33:00 AM It is amazing........great poem! Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 5/19/2009 4:27:00 PM I just noticed almost everyone here commented twice. Hmm...I am trying to think of how this poem makes me feel. Like there will be justice in the end. Yes. Love the repetition making your point. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/19/2009 4:19:00 PM i read this again and i comment again-- i am is watching;-),you can watch,i watch you too,good friend and i read your verses even before i sleep when you tag me--;-)goodnight its late here--charma Login to Reply

Sandra Hudson Date: 5/19/2009 4:14:00 PM I'm not hiding, I'm not hiding, I love your factual actuals.-AA Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/19/2009 4:57:00 AM God is watching us,hope we give him the best of our hearts and wont be false gods to him or to anyone,deep and wonderfully penned dear good friend--charma Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 5/18/2009 9:37:00 PM Nicely put John. God Bless Phyl Login to Reply

Sandra Hudson Date: 5/18/2009 6:53:00 PM You are the only man I know who can see the world from around corners. Your poetic vision is phenominal!-AA Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 5/18/2009 5:24:00 PM John III, These sentiments are mine exactly. You have put it so well here. Wonderful insight and well written. God bless you. Love, Dane Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/18/2009 4:09:00 PM We can call our Lord God, Allah or Jehovah, but as you say, they all have the same eyes, heart and mind. Very nice, John! (The tag game seems to be moving along well! Thanks for letting me play.) Login to Reply