We All Need To Mellow Out

Somebody help me, I don't understand
Why people are so damn uptight
Not like we're gonna be around forever
Aging to ninety or a hundred we might

Society needs to really mellow out 
Our tickers weren't meant for this stress
The average lifespan of a healthy peep
Could be quite a bit longer, my guess

Times we're living in is surely a factor
The pace of life is astounding
We no sooner marry and raise a family
When to old age we go a-bounding

Guess I kinda rushed you through life
Didn't mean to dampen your dreams
But oh for the laid back days of the past
Or at least that's how they seemed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Villanti Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 6:12 PM
this poem is a huge wake up call for society, I am inspired by your honesty.
Ellison Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 6:16 PM
I feel so appreciated by your comments my friend!!! Cheers!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Fabulous write dear poet! Mucho hugs Jack! xomo
Ellison Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 6:17 PM
WOW! Thank you sweetie! XOX
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