Wayside Walk

Ocean gales and tidal shift
Pounding 
Basalt and sandstone mountains
Boulders 
Rocks tumble into pebbles
Mighty trees 
Uproot and splinter in Neptune's fury
Under my feet,  
Crumbled remains of life 
Ground to dust by the unrelenting ocean
Walking barefoot on tiny shards of glass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 4:04 PM
I miss the ocean, my first love. Wanted to be a sailor at about 6 years old.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 12:43 PM
Very Nice, I feel the glass beneath my feet and the ocean wind blowing in my face. Thanks for reading my poem and commenting. Rick
Palmer Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 2:28 PM
lovely write,Ann
O'Haolin Whalen Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 6:59 PM
Nice bit of free verse, very sensitively written. It forces on to use one's imagination. Good work!
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 12:44 PM
Well written Ann, good. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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