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Wayra Shaman

Euphoric hope spills from my eyes gleaming with love, ambrosial shaman enchants aching sobs of my son; I see him mourn next to my corpse. May 21, 2020 WEAVING A WAYRA Poetry Contest Sponsor: nette onclaud Theme: Shaman Winner: 2nd Place

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2020 12:53:00 PM

The most important thing we take with us when we die are our emotions. It’s a sad but beautiful piece of Aditi. Congratulations on your podium win! Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/23/2020 7:28:00 PM

Emotions that bind us also liberate us. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Connie :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/23/2020 4:42:00 AM

how difficult to let go and yet this poem lifts the spirit, aditi, perhaps yours too...warm congrats on your high slot in my contest...huggs

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/23/2020 10:19:00 AM

I believe hope is an undying trait inside every human and it resurfaces in each phase. Thank you for giving thought provoking themes in your contest and for this placement Nette :)

John Watt

Date: 5/21/2020 6:50:00 PM

You have once again nicely blended sadness with hope in your beautiful poetry. A lovely take on the shaman choice, though always hard to imagine having to say goodbye to a child or parent. Best wishes in the contest, Aditi, I'm sure this will do well.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/21/2020 10:42:00 PM

It is definitely hard and sad to say goodbye especially with the deceased in peace and the living in mourning. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation John. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/21/2020 1:32:00 PM

I see this as the love of a mother who relies on the spiritual healing of her son. Hope I got it right, Aditi. ~ Regards // paul

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/21/2020 1:36:00 PM

Your interpretation could be one way Paul. The other could be that the son wishes to release his mother's spirit from the body and she watches him with love.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/21/2020 6:45:00 AM

I like the turn in the ending line, Aditi.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/21/2020 6:48:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :)