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Wayra - Monday

Hugging memories

              whist dreaming of love’s embrace...

in Monday morning’s morass

              reality gets stuck

as clanging bells ring the alarm.

10th grade11th grade12thverse

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Andrea Dietrich

May 23, 2020 at 8:32 PM

oh and big congrats,

Emile Pinet

May 24, 2020 at 7:41 AM

Thanks Andrea, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

May 23, 2020 at 8:32 PM

Love your wayra. Monday is very popular. AT least in this contest. haha

Emile Pinet

May 24, 2020 at 7:42 AM

Thanks again Andrea, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Aditi Mishra

May 23, 2020 at 5:57 PM

Congratulations on your win Emile! I am pleased with the way I can relate with the theme of Monday blues and I know how it feels when you dream of love's embrace only to get interrupted by the alarm. :)

Emile Pinet

May 24, 2020 at 7:40 AM

Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

May 23, 2020 at 12:24 PM

Congratulations Emile! I am not familiar with this form at all. You did very well with this expressive poem that relates how intrusive an alarm can be. Congratulations my friend on your podium win! xxoo

Emile Pinet

May 23, 2020 at 1:38 PM

Thanks Connie, I like to try my hand at as many forms as I can, your support is always much appreciated my friend, Emile.