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Waves Upon the Evening Sea

Like waves upon the evening sea Reflecting quiet moonlit stares Awash upon melodic beaches Whispered tides and windswept cares Now as we share in silent wonder Feeling soft your hand in mine Strolling down this coastal haven Pure emotions intertwine Our footprints weave in endless wander Seashells linger perfect bliss Beneath a sky of glistened shining Sweet the taste your wondrous kiss As these moments come to pass Scattered forth on heartbeat dreams Alone with you this midnight tracing Lost amidst enchanted beams I feel at peace, for this I know Like waves upon the evening sea As endless as this pristine shoreline Our love shall last eternally

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/24/2016 6:40:00 AM
You've got me swooning again my poetically romantic friend. Blissfully tender and artfully captivating.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 9:22:00 AM
I am happy to make you swoon my friend because that means my poetic goal was achieved. Thank you so much Paloma.
Date: 11/23/2016 5:35:00 PM
You are a beautiful writer, Chris, as evidenced by this poem.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 5:38:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, so much for your wonderful thoughts and comment. I appreciate your visit tonight.
Date: 11/23/2016 5:23:00 PM
Very soothing writing , Chris! Enjoyable and peaceful to read. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 5:34:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, I like to try and end the day with poetry that is soft and comforting. I am thrilled you felt this one in that way. Have a great holiday my sweet friend.
Date: 11/23/2016 5:21:00 PM
Your poetry is the most romantic...Enchanting... You use certain details..that make each poem so beautiful..such as 'Feeling soft your hand in mine'..Another fave.. Happy thanks giving ..and goodnight/Even for you.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 5:33:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend. You always say the nicest things to me. I appreciate you so much. Good night Charmaine, sweet dreams.
Date: 11/23/2016 5:19:00 PM
My kind of poetry Chris, beautiful.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 5:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Gary. I'm glad you liked this one

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