Waves - Split Haiku

flushed swells at sunset
inflamed by pink skirted clouds…
-waves-
emote crimson whorls   

rainbow wisped currents
preen and crest as daylight wanes …
-waves-
fan their peacock tails
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 1:03 PM
That must have been glorious with peacock tails in the waves..Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Allison Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 7:44 AM
amazing imagery David I especially love the peacock tails:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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