waves of weightlessness

diving through fluorescent 
      waves 
            of the cosmos,
        far beyond the stretches 
                      of exploding supernovas, 
      and collapsing
            constellations of black holes,
                our glistening 
      fingers interlace~
                      seeking solace 
    in astral weightlessness,
            where stars serenade 
                                eternal love…
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Empress Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 5:47 PM
Cosmically pleasing and so very captivating grumpy! I love it when you write light too! And your use of galactic terms in this truly adds an ethereal touch! Eternal love, only stars can serenade, oh and to interlace fingers in astral weightlessness, is what twin flames destined to be shall be! I love this one! Its a fave for me! And its always so good to read your work on soup! We need more that write from mind authentic poems! That mimic only their own heartbeat! Sending you light!
Jama Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 5:20 AM
Thank you Ink. I appreciate you and all your support.
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