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Waves of Tranquility

~ The Universe Spins Round ~ Joy and Light Shining Bright Waves of Tranquility Ocean to Sea Galaxies, Suns Combine as One Illumine Mankind His Cosmic Mind Woods and Forests Nuance and Gradation While Winds and Rain Bring forth Vegetation O! The Universe spins Round In Timeless Syncopation While Poets scribble Madly In Verbose Adoration July 16, 2020 Strand Completely New (21) Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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John Watt

Date: 8/13/2020 11:42:00 AM

"Verbose Adoration" describes my writing perfectly, lol! Doing the wave for your Waves poem, they wash over me with your delightful verse. Loved the phrase "timeless syncopation". Congratulations, friend ~ John

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/13/2020 10:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Another wonderful write. You have a great pen. I love your line ,"Waves of Tranquility." You need to put your "Waves of Tranquility" over the world and wash it clean. Enjoy your win and day...............

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2020 6:59:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Paula... Oh, and by the way, you too can have my 'great pen,' now available wherever 'great pens' are sold... lol. Thanks, again! :) gw

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/18/2020 10:56:00 PM

Hello Gershon ... poets have always been a valuable contribution in so many fields. Most of modern history is for us to read in poetry - thank you Gershon - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2020 6:58:00 PM

You're right --- although over the last 60 - 70 years poetry has taken a drastic turn for the worse, methinks... Not us here at Poetry Soup, of course!! lol. Thanks, Lindsay! :) gw

Michael Tor

Date: 7/18/2020 7:10:00 PM

Gershon had to bring out my dictionary for this one. I finally understand lol. Cleverly written my friend. Check out Celeste Solum on YouTube on the vaccination. Research it you might have second thoughts. Looking out for you friend...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/18/2020 10:04:00 PM

Thanks for your encouragement, and thank you for your concern. Very much appreciated. I shall check out Celeste, indeed. Peace and Joy, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/17/2020 12:15:00 PM

And so it will always be with poets - the post pandemic era is going to be celebrated world wide when a vaccine is found Wow - just imagine that! Hugs, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2020 1:18:00 PM

Polls in America reveal that only 49% want to take the vaccine when it comes out... While I'm in the 49% for sure, even I don't regard it as a 'cure-all.'... The Swine-flu vaccine, also rushed to market, was only partially effective... And so it goes! :) gw

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 7/17/2020 9:07:00 AM

Great verse, Gershon - I especially like the last stanza! Bob H

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2020 9:19:00 AM

Thanks for the appreciation, Robert! Happy Friday. ~ Meanwhile, scribbling madly here in Chicago.... lol.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2020 5:17:00 AM

In Timeless Syncopation! Great, Gershon! Or should I say THE Great Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2020 1:15:00 PM

I think that 'Great, Gershon!' will more than suffice, Supercalifragilistic Kim! ~ G.G

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/17/2020 2:09:00 AM

This is the universe I want to get back to, and quickly! The optimistic universe pre-pandemic! Wow! I look forward to it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2020 1:13:00 PM

Let's open up that positive universe stage by stage, OK? First you be positive. Then your family. Then your neighbors. Pretty soon it snowballs. Positivity was possible in Auschwitz. That's how some survived. If they could do it there... Blessings, gw

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/17/2020 12:23:00 AM

This poem has such beautiful imagery, and it brings happy, peaceful thoughts to mind. Best of wishes, Evelyn :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2020 1:12:00 PM

Thank you for your encouragement, Evelyn. Happy Friday! Blessings, Gershon