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Waves of Life

Splashes of waves; crashes on rocks, facts about life told me, I thought. Deterred the rocks stood; crashed harder the waves could. In bad and good times, be it rain or sun shines. Each wave made the rocks glitter; so does our life, enriched with experience better or bitter. Rushed the water as it swept by; so does our life with smile or sigh! - Mugdha Prabhakar Bhurke

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Date: 3/8/2011 5:59:00 PM
Wonderful write!Nice use of metaphors.Thanks for visiting my page---kashinath
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Date: 3/2/2011 5:10:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mugdha. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 4:19:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 2/28/2011 1:52:00 PM
Nice attempt at writing rhyming poem and nice analogy of life with water, Mugdha
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Date: 2/28/2011 1:38:00 PM
nice!!! 7 up
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