Waves of Blue

Waves drifting toward rocky 
 peaks, unchained, fresh 
 with salty breeze kissing 
 my cheek.

Wish you were here to feel 
 the wonder of it all, to linger 
 softly along shores of love 
 and star light nights. 

With the air I breathe, you'll 
 always be their in mind, you 
 have touched my heart deeply 
 with promise. 

Waters blue, I sit upon a 
 cliff, gazing as far as eyes 
 can see, an ocean filled 
 with mystery. 

I lay my soul to rest, where 
 I'm inspired by God and 
 nature, he has given me much 
 to enjoy, I've found, captured, 
 I've locked it all within.. 

(Now I Drift To You)


 By Derena 
© 2018 Derena (All rights reserved)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/17/2018 11:08:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and splendid emotion is expressed in your lovey introspective poem Harriet of appreciation and coming to inner peace. I love your dreamy last line! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:44:00 PM
OH, I just adore that last line , NOw i drift to you. You are a good writer! I am not sure if I commented to you before, but I came down here to see your first poem. Now I will answer you about publishing. I have been in many anthologies and magazines with other poet friends. I've self published 8 chapbooks all out of print now. I've been writing since 2000. How about you?
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Date: 3/12/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thank you Silent One..My mind is made of imagination.. Hugs--Harriet
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Date: 3/12/2018 7:34:00 AM
Great first post, I enjoyed the imagery in this one..
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Date: 3/7/2018 8:55:00 AM
What a beautiful image... nicely done! I really enhoyed this poem.
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Date: 3/7/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Edward..I am happy you enjoyed; Hugs Derena
Date: 3/5/2018 2:56:00 PM
Beautiful imagery - I truly enjoyed this
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:56:00 AM
A veey beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed reading it, you re right we ahould always be happy in what God has given us, especially because this life is only a test, it s to test us and to see whether we pass it or not, if we manage to pass it and earn our salvation, Gardners of heaven are waiting for us
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Date: 3/7/2018 6:33:00 PM
Your so very right. Thank you so much.. Hugs, Derena
Date: 3/1/2018 4:13:00 AM
Acceptance, peace, and appreciation are some of the words I felt as I read your poem...Lovely imagery too...All the best Harriet
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Harriet Shea
Date: 3/1/2018 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much. I am so happy you enjoyed my write..Derena is my writing name. Harriet
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