Waves and Graves

Wrinkles on the waves, 
Each pebble tries to leave marks, 
Water is their grave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 8:27 PM
Quite a thought-provoking image, Luminita. It could also be interpreted to refer to man's quest to leave his mark on the world. Excellent haiku! Best wishes, Carolyn
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January 30, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Wonderful Haiku. Thanks for sharing.
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