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Waves and Graves

Wrinkles on the waves, Each pebble tries to leave marks, Water is their grave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/30/2010 8:27:00 PM
Quite a thought-provoking image, Luminita. It could also be interpreted to refer to man's quest to leave his mark on the world. Excellent haiku! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2010 6:53:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku. Thanks for sharing.
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