Waves

Warmth of a disturbance
When energy travels
With wings of passion through
Water, air and land. The
Wax and wane of moon stirs
Waves of ocean to swell:
Whirls of soft ebb and flow.


Date: 05/10/2021
Submitted for: Pleiades W Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Roper Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:40 PM
Great flow in your verse, Anitha, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve
Theraven Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Anitha, Very fine waves. And whirls too, like milk stirred into my Wednesday coffee. I like a poem that begs me to take ten seconds from my busy day and just breath. -Richard
Alex Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:16 AM
Science and Poeticity combined!
Brul Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:33 PM
wonderful use of Ws in this awesome creation dear Anitha. Congratulations on your top Win.. Keep safe always.
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 1:21 PM
I just knew it. you are TOP DOG, and that' s a good term!! Congrats.
Merryman Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 1:09 PM
A fantastic description of waves, Anitha! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 12:14 PM
- Beautiful, Ani :) - Congratulations on your top first place in this contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Hi Anitha, congratulations on your top win; you deserve it with this gem pleiades Regards and hugs
Alex Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 9:00 PM
It's a Very Beautiful Poem.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:35 PM
Lovely. God bless you always my friend and I wish you a win. Love, Gina
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 2:25 PM
I think you have written yet ANOTHER awesome WINNER
Buhagiar Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 9:21 AM
A poem that warms my heart. Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:37 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Anitha ~
Turner Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:05 AM
Very nice Anitha. Good luck. Hope your weekend went well:)
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