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Waves

Warmth of a disturbance When energy travels With wings of passion through Water, air and land. The Wax and wane of moon stirs Waves of ocean to swell: Whirls of soft ebb and flow. Date: 05/10/2021 Submitted for: Pleiades W Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Date: 5/13/2021 8:40:00 PM
Great flow in your verse, Anitha, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/12/2021 6:53:00 AM
Anitha, Very fine waves. And whirls too, like milk stirred into my Wednesday coffee. I like a poem that begs me to take ten seconds from my busy day and just breath. -Richard
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Date: 5/12/2021 12:16:00 AM
Science and Poeticity combined!
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Date: 5/11/2021 8:33:00 PM
wonderful use of Ws in this awesome creation dear Anitha. Congratulations on your top Win.. Keep safe always.
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Date: 5/11/2021 1:21:00 PM
I just knew it. you are TOP DOG, and that' s a good term!! Congrats.
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Date: 5/11/2021 1:09:00 PM
A fantastic description of waves, Anitha! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/11/2021 1:07:00 PM
Anitha, congratulations on your top win for a very fine "W" Pleiades! Carol Louise
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Date: 5/11/2021 12:14:00 PM
- Beautiful, Ani :) - Congratulations on your top first place in this contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/11/2021 8:34:00 AM
Hi Anitha, congratulations on your top win; you deserve it with this gem pleiades Regards and hugs
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Date: 5/10/2021 9:00:00 PM
It's a Very Beautiful Poem.
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Date: 5/10/2021 5:35:00 PM
Lovely. God bless you always my friend and I wish you a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/10/2021 2:25:00 PM
I think you have written yet ANOTHER awesome WINNER
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Date: 5/10/2021 9:21:00 AM
A poem that warms my heart. Well done.
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Date: 5/10/2021 5:37:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Anitha ~
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Date: 5/10/2021 5:05:00 AM
Very nice Anitha. Good luck. Hope your weekend went well:)
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