Waves

ocean crescendos
crystal curls in summer’s sun
splash wild wet diamonds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Orozco Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 10:02 AM
Beautifully said... =)
Leiser Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 11:03 AM
Thank you, Edward! :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:34 PM
I'm glad to see this one scored high. Congrats to you
Wolf Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 1:25 PM
Luscious language! Wonderful winner, Laura. :) gw
Leiser Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 3:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Callus Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 12:16 PM
A delightful offering in which sight, sound and movement take pride of place, Laura. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
Leiser Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Thanks so much, Paul! I’m so happy you enjoyed this one! :)
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Many congratulations on your win with this lovely poem laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 10:42 AM
Thank you, Jan! :)
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 8:01 AM
- So lovely, Laura :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 10:46 AM
Thank you, Anne Lise! :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 4:53 AM
Back with congrats Laura. Tom.
Leiser Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 10:47 AM
Thank you, Tom! :)
May Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 10:40 PM
Beautiful haiku Laura..Congrats on your win..
Leiser Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 12:01 AM
Thank you, Joseph! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 9:50 PM
Congrats on your win!
Leiser Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 12:01 AM
Thank you, Kim! :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:52 PM
Lovely dynamic imagery, Laura. Congrats on your top win.
Leiser Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:58 PM
Thanks so much, Line! :)
Kitchin Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:23 PM
Laura, awesome imagery, loved the line, " splash wild wet diamonds", congratulations on your 1st winning placement in the contest!
Leiser Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:58 PM
Thank you so very much for my placement in your awesome contest, Tania! I am thrilled! :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 4:31 PM
one of the best I have read.
Leiser Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Gosh, I’m so excited you like this, Andrea! It really makes my day! :D
Cunningham Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Lovely image Laura. Tom.
Leiser Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Thank you, Tom! :)
May Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 9:29 PM
Well done Laura!
Leiser Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Thank you, Bobby! :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Lovely, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Thank you, Line! :)
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