Debbie Guzzi Poet Rhyme

Wavering Light

Calves spasm in the night
warm, wet, wavering candlelight.

Western congestion, returned plight,
the drone of insects, the mosquito’s bite;

Infected, reflected, so much fright!

Warm wet, wavering candlelight.
Calves spasm in the night.

Calm balm, unsanitary redress;
old quandary, old mess;
stomachs tension diaphragms fright;

Warm, wet wavering
Hope for the Light.

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Derrick Burton December 28, 2008 at 1:27 PM same thing michela said, you commented on one of my poems before, but i never got around to responding, you are an artist with words and why you asked about the text like poetry. great poetry and hope to talk to you again in the CHATROOM ON POETRY SOUP.

Michaela Payne December 28, 2008 at 12:57 PM wow this was beautiful, I've never read any of your poetry, or heard of you until the chat room, but this was really goo. Beautiful imagery and word choice. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece. Blessings, ~Michaela~